I am writing this to reveal that before a day, I had dined at your restaurant which is extremely worse experience in my life. It is not only about the catering facility but also about the furnishing facility.
I reserve a private table for my family at Raymond on the special occasion rather we had not allocated the same. Even, I had booked before a month and clearly instructed about the cuisine. While we arrived at the Raymond wait for an order for nearly thirty minutes which was very disgusting. Furthermore, I had directed that food should nuts free and not contain red chili rather its intense spicy.
I am fully dissatisfied with your poor services. You have contravene the provision of food and health policy formulated by of social civic body. Thus, I want a full refund for meal. I look forward to prompt response.
Regards.
xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I am writing this to reveal that before ...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut also about the furnishing facility. I reserve a private table for my family ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in red chili rather its intense spicy. I am fully dissatisfied with your poor s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contravened'.
Suggestion: contravened
...sfied with your poor services. You have contravene the provision of food and health policy...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to prompting'.
Suggestion: to prompting
... a full refund for meal. I look forward to prompt response. Regards. xyz
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Xyz
...orward to prompt response. Regards. xyz
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74324324324 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57470558289 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709459459459 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8488249371 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103408731952 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354828585419 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438830312037 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729972624088 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480007257062 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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