You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend, tn your letter, you should:
• tell him/her which kind of food your children tike and dislike
• tell him/her which kind of activities your children can attend
• tell him/her the time you will pick up your children
Dear Flora
How are you? Hope!! you are enjoying your life after marriage. I am penning this epistle because I want you to babysit my daughter for a week as I have to go to business trip next month. She enjoys your company a lot so Malisa will be happy to stay with you.
You know that, Malisa is just one year old so she eats mashed fruits and vegetables, milk and pulses soup. I hope that you would never mind to prepare a cup of soup daily for Malisa. Beside that, I will also pack some baby food. Moreover, you have to take extra care of her as Malisa learns walking recently. She is always excited to walk so you should keep your main door shut. It would be beneficial, if you take her every evening to the park so that she can play with other children and it is necessary for her physical growth.
I will pick her on second Monday of next month. I will call you as soon as I will be back from London. Thank you!!!!!!!!!
Yours truly
Fernandas
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- Some people say material possessions are very useful in bringing us happiness but other argue that they are useless in terms of providing happiness.Discuss both the views and your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from you 73
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. you phoned the shop but no action was taken.Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter. describe the problem with the equpment.. explain what happened when you phoned t 56
- More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport What are the reasons for this trend How can the government encourage people to take public transport Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own know 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
Dear Flora How are you? Hope!! you are enjoying your life after marriage. ...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: one-year-old
...h you. You know that, Malisa is just one year old so she eats mashed fruits and vegetable...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind preparing'.
Suggestion: mind preparing
...ulses soup. I hope that you would never mind to prepare a cup of soup daily for Malisa. Beside ...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to walk'.
Suggestion: to walk
...take extra care of her as Malisa learns walking recently. She is always excited to walk...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23369565217 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10021124826 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657608695652 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1002698284 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9230769231 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240159359254 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951159778353 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589042734827 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154554899131 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576547784651 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.