You are going to take a vacation soon and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
– Tell him/her why you want the holiday/vacation
– Describe your plan
– Invite him/her to go with you.
Hi John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I'm writing this letter to ask you to accompany me on my vacation to South Africa in the month of March.
To be honest with you, I'm snowed under with work and in need of a much-needed break from monotonous work. Therefore, I was planning to take out some time relaxing and rejuvenating myself in the forests of Africa. So, when I come back I can start my work with a refreshing and energetic mood.
With regard to the plan, I remember last time you've mentioned your friend Josephs' trip to South Africa and how amazing it was. So I've also decided to visit there and witness the mesmerizing beauty of Africa's wildlife sanctuary and gigantic mountains, as this would also help me in writing my project thesis on wildlife. I would rather go with you than alone as we share perfect bonding with each other. I was wondering to plan this trip during the Christmas holidays as we have almost a week's work off during that time.
With regard to a companion, there would not be anyone as good as you are. I really enjoyed our last trip to Thailand and want to make this holiday memorable with you as my partner. I'm pretty sure that you will enjoy this trip by experiencing the panoramic beauty of Africa's forest and hilly life.
I hope you'll not turn me down and start your preparation with full enthusiasm for this trip.
Your's lovingly,
Donald
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...radiant health and the best of spirits. Im writing this letter to ask you to accom...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...h of March. To be honest with you, Im snowed under with work and in need of a...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forests of Africa. So, when I come back I can start my work with a refreshing an...
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Line 13, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...egard to the plan, I remember last time youve mentioned your friend Josephs trip to S...
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Line 13, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...South Africa and how amazing it was. So Ive also decided to visit there and witness...
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Line 13, column 486, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...he Christmas holidays as we have almost a weeks work off during that time. With ...
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Line 13, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most a weeks work off during that time. With regard to a companion, there would ...
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Line 17, column 182, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...liday memorable with you as my partner. Im pretty sure that you will enjoy this tr...
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Line 21, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...icas forest and hilly life. I hope youll not turn me down and start your prepara...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, therefore, thus, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59459459459 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38717472784 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1373398689 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301372157348 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106407555865 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592596754575 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156308968848 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451175282409 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.