Dear Diksha,
Hope you are doing well. I am very glad to hear that you are coming next month in India for 3 months. I would love to meet you and so excited for this. I am writing today to insist you to visit New Zealand with me.
I am too busy in my whirlpool of duties that I have not taken any break from busy schedule. Finally, I have decided to visit New Zealand as I had long been planning for it. Therefore, I have taken leave for two weeks. We will be travelling there on first week of May.
I have made a plan. I thought travelling to Auckland would be best place to choose as my sister lives there. She promised me to take us to all places of interest like Rotorua, Sky Tower, Wellington and so on. Then we will visit to South island where my brother resides to enjoy the scenery of nature.
I would like to have you with me rather than travelling alone. We also get my quality time together after so long time. We are meeting after 5 years I think this is best way to rejuvenate ourselves with beautiful country.
I hope you will not turn me down and finalise your preparation to have a memorable tour to New Zealand in May.
Warm wishes
Gurjeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Diksha, Hope you are doing well. I am very glad ...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve to meet you and so excited for this. I am writing today to insist you to visit...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st you to visit New Zealand with me. I am too busy in my whirlpool of duties t...
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Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
... I thought travelling to Auckland would be best place to choose as my sister lives ther...
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Line 8, column 163, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... are meeting after 5 years I think this is best way to rejuvenate ourselves with beauti...
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Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to New Zealand in May. Warm wishes Gurjeet
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ealand in May. Warm wishes Gurjeet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25892857143 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24203166679 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611607142857 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.033491979 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.1176470588 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1764705882 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152150817862 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507537111714 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597019771542 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941604312884 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789373086386 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.54 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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