In this modernity,most of the solitary well beings have a dream of bright profession and a joyful family together.But there are several issues in managing both Career and family . It does not mean that these difficulties do not have any way to cub it.This essay will discuss the problems and the solutions to tackle the issue.
On the one hand ,one of the major issue is that employees have to work for long hours in office but after returning back to home they tried to spend some time with their children ,wife and other members of family but they are not able to because of tiredness and stress of work even though they do not get enough time to spend with themselves.Another reason might be that nowadays workers are running for earning a lot of money to live a luxurious life it has become their career goal so that they can easily meet their all needs as a result they forget their family.Hence they achieve the success but fails to provide happiness to the family.
On the other hand,one of the preponderance solution of the issue in order to manage both the aspect of family and career is that individuals should do their job with dedication so that they could spend valuable time with their family on weekends without any pressure for the completion of office
work.Furthermore,employees shoul take a long leave of atleast two months in a year to go for a long trip with their family or relatives.Therefore, they can invest best of the time with family and get refresh.After returning from such holidays they get back to office with fresh mind and can give their best in acheiving career.
In conclusion,although earning money and acheiving good career opportunity is dream of all but still they must provide some quality time to their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75816993464 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99664707396 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.82903599 49.4020404114 471% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.2 106.682146367 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.2 20.7667163134 295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12377580473 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065267150845 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249410415898 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696584241937 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216613054411 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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