You are going to take a vacation soon and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to come with you. In your letter, you should:
-Tell him/her why you want the holiday/vacation
-Describe your plan
-Invite him/her to go with you.
Dear Anil,
I hope you are doing great. As you know, the pandemic has been ended after the last two years of its dreadful effects on our lives. Fortunately, everything is being back to normal in our lives, and I have decided to go out on a holiday to the Hills. And, I am writing this letter to invite you to come along with me to enjoy this weekend trip to the mountains.
After a long time spent at home due to the Covid-19 pandemic across the world, the government impose on traveling and requested us to stay in our homes. Luckily, the pandemic has been ended and we got our lifestyle back to normal. This is the reason I have planned a small vacation to go out of the city to relax and hope that you would care to join my company.
Moreover, I have planned a small hike trip that has a 360 view from the top of the hill. Plus, we will have music, drinks, and born fire during the night to enjoy our time while camping in the valley. The whole trip will be organized and expensed by me, and you just have to say yes while giving me a call after reading this letter.
I hope this vacation will start a new chapter of our lives. So, I will be delighted if you will come and join me on this weekend holiday to the mountains.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anil, I hope you are doing great. As you know,...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this weekend holiday to the mountains. Looking forward to hearing from you soon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, while, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16591928251 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1010966591 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8864223882 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181403048173 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702242179251 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494882328451 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111098232152 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043339677379 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.