Dear Manoj,
It's been almost two years and we haven't seen each other. I hope you are doing well, and have been safe in the post-Covid world.
As you know, the pandemic of coronavirus has been ended and our lives went back to normal. But before that, we were staying in our homes due to government impose on travel restrictions due to the pandemic of coronavirus. Therefore, I am thinking to take a vacation to the Maldives in the coming month of November for the first week. And, you know I don't like solo traveling, so, I would request you to join me on this trip.
I know a person who is a professional worker in travel bookings for international tours. He has given me the brochure which has brief details of the trip to the Maldives which is especially for like us Bachelors. We both always wanted to do water sports, and this would be a best place to get our desire complete. Besides, we will get a good experience of mouthwatering dishes of seafood and other cuisines. The trip will be for one week and the budget of the trip will be around fifty thousand rupees including flights, hotel stay, and watersports. However, if we need to buy any antique items, that will cost separately on our trip.
We both wanted to experience beach life, and the Maldives will be the best place to experience it. Therefore, I invite you to come along on the trip. Plus, I have contacted our school friend Ravi who is also excited to come with us on our Bachelor's trip.
Looking forward to hearing a positive response from this letter.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, first, if, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 26.3917525773 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27564102564 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2677091813 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9566077059 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1111111111 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188847274322 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591683062692 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564031852898 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112322175752 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606766541786 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.