You are going to visit the town that your friend went to university.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- explain why you will be visiting the town
- give details of where you will be staying
- as your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.
Dear Paul,
It's been a while since our last chat. Hope everything goes well with you. I'm writing to let you know that I'm coming there to pay you a visit next week.
As you might know from my Instagram page, I've had such a hard year back at work. You won't believe how much I need to relax because of all those stressful days. So I asked myself: "What could be the best vacation place?" and suddenly you came into mind. Anyway, Let's have a break together like old times.
Today, I just booked a single room in a 5-star hotel, which means I'm gonna rock it! Amazingly, it is so close to where you live. Breakfast is included, so we can have lunch and dinner at each restaurant or coffee shop that serves good food; you should know better! Also, you can come over, there is sauna and swimming pool downstairs of the hotel so we can spend a great time.
Besides, I'm sure you can show me around. There must be lots of amazing sites and places in the town, waiting to be discovered by us! So, I'd like to know more about them before I get there. I wonder if you could send me some pictures of those places.
I'm looking forward to seeing you,
Keep in touch,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd me some pictures of those places. Im looking forward to seeing you, Keep ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, if, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30044843049 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10988334128 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72197309417 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9279968209 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7692307692 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183350367033 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659930444011 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038817720063 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10937326706 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280901654301 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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