Hi Sunny,
Thanks for offering to assist me in finding a house in Victoria Island. When this transfer came, I felt miserable and needed someone who lives in the city and understands it very well to guide me. You came like an angel you have always been and proposed to take this burden off me completely. I am indeed very grateful to you.
My new office is at 72 Ademola Street and I would love to live within a walking distance of twenty minutes from this address. Also, I would love areas with good electricity and water supply, and be having made my research, Zenith Bank Road and Kings Street fit these requirements.
In addition, I have had experience living in a compound with two many tenants and would want that no more. My preference is for an apartment with no more than six flats within the compound. The building must have adequate security and will be safety compliant too. The apartment should have two or three bedrooms with two exit doors - one in the kitchen and another in the living room. I am also constrained by budget and will love something within two million naira, inclusive of all charges.
Emi, once again, thank you for this act of true friendship and please, contact me once you go for inspection so we can discuss. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours friend,
Chinedu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: TO_TOO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ad experience living in a compound with two many tenants and would want that no mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63829787234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42064518787 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672340425532 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6330293487 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226706837111 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774355327495 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562258430706 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114918085589 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597869696251 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.