You visited a restaurant for a meal.You were served meat(non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal.You are very annoyed at this incident.Complain to the restaurant manager for the same.In your letter•explain your annoying experience•describe the unprofessio

Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to exude my complete dissatisfaction over the service of your staff and hotel. I am being a regular foodie and customer to your hotel, I was disgusted yesterday by the uncivil behavior your staff executed.

To start with, I have planned my dinner last night at your hotel with my loved ones knowing that your hotel serves a delicious food. It was the first time when I was with my family ended up arguing with your staff. The reason for the argument is the replacement of food item with non-vegetarian and I completely make hold of your new manager, who incessantly ignoring my humble request for the items. Moreover, the service of food items have been prolonged and our interest in the dinner has been ravaged.

Secondly, I would like to bring to your notice that despite my argument, he billed me with a huge amount of Rs.2500 and that too on a non-accountable food we received. I would like you to take an immediate action and look into my case and revert the amount I have paid.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
James

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... last night at your hotel with my loved ones knowing that your hotel serves a delici...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69072164948 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63339008331 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4627692151 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160950667438 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071169860508 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354613882993 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965446929353 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160907995142 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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