Dear James,
I am very much delighted for your invitation to your birthday party and my best wishes are always with you. I am also very glad that you rely on my suggestion and writing this letter in response to your request. Let's celebrate your day and make it memorable.
I am sure you would have already done but as a side note, I suggest you invite all our friends. Firstly, I suggest booking a table at the resort by the name "George Resorts", which is very suitable for kind of parties. It is around 5 km from your home. It offers a variety of delicious dishes and liquors. Last week I have attended a party at this resort and I was astonished by the service. I guarantee that we all will have a good time there.
Secondly, as you are turning 25 this year and all the attendees are adults, I find there is no wrong in hosting beer at the party, so I wonder if you can afford it. I know it a bit money blowing suggestion but right now the resort is offering a huge discount for birthday parties.
Let me know your thoughts so that I can assist you in booking the resort.
Thanks,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...is letter in response to your request. Lets celebrate your day and make it memorabl...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat we all will have a good time there. Secondly, as you are turning 25 this yea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g a huge discount for birthday parties. Let me know your thoughts so that I can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34449760766 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47285577458 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7899792637 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122107817678 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461709342487 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412797880813 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767674269997 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519728319456 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.