Dear John,
I am writing this letter in response to the inconvenience caused to you. I plead your pardon for the same.
As you may be aware that my apartment has not any ideal ventilation in the kitchen leading which does not let the fresh air to enter the kitchen. Moreover,
my living room windows are not tightened correctly. The above reasons drive me to get a plumber to amend the apartment and this leads to heavy noises disturbing neighbors around.
In spite of my best effort, the work lasted for 48 continues hours and I regret the situation you went through. As you mentioned in your complaint, I was not aware of the exams your child were to appear. If I did, I would have postponed it to the near future.
However, from next instance, I would let you know earlier and would inform everyone including apartment association, and upon the permission of all, I would start the work.
I will make sure and try my level best to complete the work on the priority basis. As a token of your patience, I would like to invite you for the small party hosted in my flat this evening.
Hoping to see you in the evening.
Yours faithfully,
- James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... I plead your pardon for the same. As you may be aware that my apartment has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, you know, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58851674641 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49280597573 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0473799792 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7692307692 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272161102256 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979264556169 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797531220257 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113504569843 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075851947314 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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