Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise.Describe what action you will take.

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise.
Describe what action you will take.

Dear Romiya,

Good day to you. Hope you are doing well. We are good by the grace of Almighty God.

For the last few days, you may heard lot of noise from my apartment. It could have disturbed you and your family members reasonably. First of all, I am personally apologising to you for this cause occur. Even I also frustrated about their sound. Why can not you?

This is mainly because of my relatives who came from my hometown. Mostly they are my folks and naughty children. They used to play in the second hall which is directly facing to your apartment. That's why, you are receiving loud sound from them. Once again, I am really sorry for the inconvenience happened to you.

I hope, hereafter you will never hear their shouting and painful sound. I already told them to play and music in the first hall which is near to the road side. So most of the unwanted sounds directed toward the street side. And also, I advised them to close the windows, so that the unhealthy noise will never interrupt to you.

I hope, you understand my situations and forgive me for this regard. Please convey my best regards and wishes to you and your family members.

Yours lovingly,
Aslam.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...h is directly facing to your apartment. Thats why, you are receiving loud sound from ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19341563786 0.220444632235 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.139917695473 0.167888034529 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0534979423868 0.0606518309736 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0699588477366 0.0506257000042 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.156378600823 0.118615021944 132% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0905349794239 0.107062808482 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0205761316872 0.041066498444 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30650735858 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0411522633745 0.0385302599488 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0576131687243 0.0714148451538 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205761316872 0.0191574576366 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0205761316872 0.00930345855455 221% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1186.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.134020619 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56807511737 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.253521126761 0.284621296913 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.169014084507 0.211203875043 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1220657277 0.133321485273 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0845070422535 0.0843313296314 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30650735858 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 61.7732448405 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 12.9587628866 154% => OK
Sentence length: 10.65 16.4300151701 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2046729316 44.7399317507 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3 90.9928171075 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.65 16.4300151701 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.613754768223 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 27.5514084507 37.5504026743 73% => OK
Elegance: 0.831460674157 1.13073093955 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367652914333 0.331212695627 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0617127918429 0.0927372745006 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621622898766 0.0736520305886 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.490203826374 0.579516596996 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143660788944 0.180689518051 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112258742162 0.122183219658 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825702022469 0.0765303033291 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233275769711 0.211926503985 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0528172443176 0.0737400523855 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216790248465 0.203819188451 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587830180967 0.067151250289 88% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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