Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated.
Write a letter to your friend.
Say what type of party should be held e.g themed,fancy dress,black tie event
Suggest a suitable venue
Make recommandation as to entertainment e.g Dj,jazz,band etc.
Dear John
Wishing you many happy birthday in advance!
I am writing this missive to offer you some suggestion to make your special day more memorable and remarkable.
As you are going to enter on teenage, so, I would like to suggest going for an themed party as our friend circle never had one an also give your party a unique taste. Ranjit-Avenue's Bombay house is the best place to have one such kind of party as their staff are well trained in their job and prices are also very reasonable.
Having Dj after some snacks will also give you respect in our friend circle, as dancing with girls will open up you as teenager little bit and making your dream come true, so, planning to have Dj in your party is mandatory requirment. You can also choose some different source of entertainment but i would suggest going with Dj.
I hope we will have blast in your party, waiting for your call.
Yours truly
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
..., so, I would like to suggest going for an themed party as our friend circle never...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('also') instead an adjective, or a noun ('give') instead of another adjective.
...arty as our friend circle never had one an also give your party a unique taste. Ranjit-Avenu...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...with girls will open up you as teenager little bit and making your dream come true, so, pl...
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Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e different source of entertainment but i would suggest going with Dj. I hope ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60240963855 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27449330295 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2460547859 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152962308095 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856563881505 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035743071006 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791454614827 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258273908619 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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