Dear Rachel,
I hope you are doing great. Yesterday only I got your letter in which you have mentioned that you are going to celebrate your sweet sixteen birthday and you would love to hear some suggestions from me.
Firstly I am utterly joyful for this event. It is a big day of your life. So we should make most out of it. Have you thought of any theme for party? Recently, I went to see Barbie movie and I would highly recommand that we all should dressed up in various barbie theme outfits such as school barbie, kitchen barbie and so on.
As per theme, you should look out for some open roof restaurant where everyone can enjoy fully. Martino's bar and restuarant would be perfect venue. Moreover, they serve delicious food and drinks and also offer student discount.
Furthermore, donot worry about entertainment because they play live music all night. Besides this, we can paly some games like UNO, cards, truth and dare. They will be great nostalgic memories from our childhood.
I hope my recommendations are helpful to you.
Yours friendly,
Monali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'birthday' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'birthdays'.
Suggestion: birthdays
...e going to celebrate your sweet sixteen birthday and you would love to hear some suggest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41860333137 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724324324324 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9147035273 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18418784103 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520210555597 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461787590647 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767906959398 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501330233048 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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