It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is an institution which admits men and women to family life. But with the advent of globalisation or modernization, people donot have time for this religious sancity. In the past, people used to get married at a younger age. However, in the modern society, individuals reduced the priority of getting married, as their demands from life increased. I personally believe that getting married before the thirties is beneficial for people as wel as the society.
To begin with, if folks decid to get married before thirty, then they have enough time to understand each other, before starting their own family. This will help them to develop trust in each other, as well as, helps them to get familiar with their partner's dream. They can plan their children for better future. Thus, it is apparent that this marriage will provide them ample of time for structuring their future in a positive way.
Besides this, couples wedded before these years have higher chances of having a healthy baby at young age. As with the passage of age, woman's came acriss different types of gynae problem and doctors commonly say, ladies who plan to have child after her 30, will experience less chance of conceiving, because, their is always a chance of complication, which can result in poor health of both mother and baby. If couple will have children earlier, then their less likely for them to suffer from ailments, and there by, increases life expectancy of human beings. From this, it is clear that government might need to spend minimum resources on health benefits of society and can concentrate largely on the economic growth of the nation.
In crux, after analysing all tye benefits, it is clear that such people can expect healthy family life and thus country can expect the growth. So the people should be motivated for getting married thirty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le of time for structuring their future in a positive way. Besides this, couples wedded before...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...nce less chance of conceiving, because, their is always a chance of complication, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94855305466 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41876313671 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5123143186 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254814596182 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102952619612 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934619117983 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166629731835 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748696634618 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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