Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.
What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 word.
It is always argued that legal bodies should reimburse one of the janitor of the toddler to be at home to look after their kid. With its hugely rewarding benefits like less financial burden on the parents', some demerits are also there such as the parents' become lazy , and will misuse this policy , and burden on government.
As far as the merits regarding pay off the caretakers for roaring their children are concerned, the predominant one is that in this burgeoning inflation it is highly essential for both the male and female partner to work, but by getting payment for be at home for the upbringing of their children will loosen up the financial burden from the shoulders of the parents. Doubtlessly, they can take care of their offspring's more easily and can inculcate moral ethics among their kid. For example, a recent study by Queen's University in U.K., it is revealed that in U.K., when regimes offered monetary gains to one of the parent to look after their child at home, the parents ad children , both were equally satisfied and the kids were more happy with their family.
On the male counterparts, some negative consequences are also there as by implementing of this policy, the parents can become more lazy and will not pursue their professional life. They can further misuse this money for their personal benefits and most importantly, it would be a burden on economy of the government to compensate so many families. It does not add much value to improve the GDP of a nation. so, when the government pays millions of fathers and mothers for just staying at home and taking care of their children, it will push nation into financial difficulty.
To recapitulate, government giving money to one of the parent can have more disadvantages so, nations with very low population could perhaps experiment this policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88141025641 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6337231932 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6075662394 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.3 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319759069576 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123098858142 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069893722338 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191520606164 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375210477867 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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