You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear…
Dear Mohammad,
Hi. How’ve you been doing? I hope this letter finds you well.
The other day, I was looking at the ads in a newspaper that an advertisement for a cooking class caught my eye. The course is going to take place in the college located in Downtown from June 11th to 14th from 17 till 19.
I personally find this course interesting, and I thought to inform you so that we can attend together. Ever since I left Iran, I’ve been having trouble with the local food in Canada. I even tried some iranian restaurants, but their food failed to satisfy me, thus, I’ve decided to give it a try to learn myself how to cook iranian food, which is what’s going to be taught in this course. I remembered you complained about the same trouble, and so I hope you’ll find the course helpful, as well.
If you’re having second thoughts whether to join or not, let’s discuss the idea in person. Is June 4th look with you? I propose going to the bar near your place, therefore not only can we hang around with each other after a while, but we’ll be able to discuss the course while having some cold beers.
Pass on my regards to your family.
Yours,
Aidin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohammad, Hi. How've you been doing? I hope t...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'was', 'were'?
Suggestion: was; were
Dear Mohammad, Hi. How've you been doing? I hope this letter finds you wel...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61860465116 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47757274055 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660465116279 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2875954812 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179728518006 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687778478357 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393477017173 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105041113847 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270753546161 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.