You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Martha,
Hi! How are you? I hope all is well. Summer is fast approaching and I am planning to try something new next month. Last week, I saw a post at my brother's University about a cooking course of different Asian cuisines. Sounds interesting, right? They will held it in their gymnasium for three days from December 3-5, 2018 and it is 6 hours per session.
I know you will like this course because you love food. It is one way also to kill time, especially that you have not decided if you will travel abroad or just go to your parents house. Furthermore, each group should have 2 person to register for the course and I am hoping that you will be that second person. In addition, I will shoulder the fees so that you will not have any reason to decline my request. This will be fun, trust me.
Let's meet this coming friday at Tea café around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. we need to discuss about a certain recipe that we will share in the class. Call me if the place and time is convenient for you.
love lots,
Anna ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Martha, Hi! How are you? I hope all is well. Sum...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...s. Sounds interesting, right? They will held it in their gymnasium for three days fr...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., 2018 and it is 6 hours per session. I know you will like this course because...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
.... Furthermore, each group should have 2 person to register for the course and I am hop...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y request. This will be fun, trust me. Lets meet this coming friday at Tea café...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...l be fun, trust me. Lets meet this coming friday at Tea café aro...
^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...this coming friday at Tea café around 4 oclock in the afternoon. we need to discuss ab...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... café around 4 oclock in the afternoon. we need to discuss about a certain recipe ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Love
...ace and time is convenient for you. love lots, Anna ala
^^^^
Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me is convenient for you. love lots, Anna ala
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29081632653 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27078648533 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688775510204 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6445414241 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237727241158 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671186684221 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593437923646 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139060754447 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786340391163 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.