Dear Sir/Ma,
I am writing in respect to the advert your company placed in CityJobs Magazine yesterday, for the role of a Research Assistant. I am interested in having a career growth with your company.
I hold a Bachelor's degree in Pharmaceutical Science from Loughborough University, and a Master's degree in Forensic Science from Queen's University, London. I would love to apply for the role of Head of Research Unit in your prestigious company, with my working hours as 9-2 due to my ongoing doctorate degree at the Queen's University, where I hope to brush up on my skills and gain more knowledge.
I have 10 years work experience in the research field working as a Research Officer at Medcare Hospital for 5 years, and heading the Cancer Research team at The University of Hull, where I was in charge of data analysis, calculations, and laboratory research. My team at the University Received an award for the Most Resourceful Team, and I have received various praises and my salary was raised four yearly due to the relentless effort I put in my work, and the positive results we achieved.
Working with your company will help me grow career-wise, and have an international opportunity as I have always hoped for.
I look forward to receiving a positive response from you as I really anticipate working with your company.
Thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Faith Odunowo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir/Ma, I am writing in respect to the advert yo...
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...y placed in CityJobs Magazine yesterday, for the role of a Research Assistant. I...
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...g a career growth with your company. I hold a Bachelors degree in Pharmaceutic...
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...Science from Queens University, London. I would love to apply for the role of Hea...
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...n my skills and gain more knowledge. I have 10 years work experience in the re...
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...s. Yours Sincerely, Faith Odunowo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94205585056 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7707719147 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108393035876 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491580512071 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343800968711 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679844709429 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329531616913 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.