Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to your company with regard to assist me in finding a part-time profession.
I, Ashwika Kapoor, from Chandigarh, India, and at present, I am working as a French facilitator with a reputed international school. I did my master's degree in the French language and also accomplished a diploma in French Literature. Further, I am pursuing an online course on translation, which will be completed next month.
As I have already mentioned above that I am a passionate teacher and would like to teach primary students who have developed their interest in learning a foreign language and its culture.
Its been eight glorious years, I am in the same profession which enables me to teach French literature and grammar with an interesting, and playful way to the learners. The students would love to attain the new skill which would further help them in getting better options.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Ashika Kapoor
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sanakhalid1234
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63070163786 2.54303337028 143% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685534591195 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9546154895 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108213655973 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468545509666 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049045841964 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704034664925 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553448495284 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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