You are a Member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory and you are very disappointed with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff.
Write a letter to the manager of a restaurant. What was wrong with meal and the service , and suggest what he/she and serviced should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.
Dear sir / madam
I am in writing this letter this letter to tell you that i am the regular customer of your restaurant during the weekends when our organisation hold member meet in your place. During the recent meal quality of food and service of staff has degraded in numerous ways . The trust of pride and legacy does not seems be continued.
Firstly, the behaviour of Hotel attendant and other members was rude. Furtherly, they talk in arrogant way with some women's and senior citizens of cover group at the time of ordering food . In the addition the waiters are asking for extra tip which is totally against the rules and regulations of restaurant. Secondly, the Quality and quantity of served food also scare as compare to last visit. Moreover, the enormous use of spices and oil on the ordered cuisine.
Last but not least, on the prior booking of hall group has informed about the hygienic on the top of list. But during the time of meet the washroom are smelling with bad fragrance. In similar to citing, dishes are also not neat and clean.
At the end, I hope that your hotel will improve the quality and services in short. I will look forward to hearing from you about concerned issues
and actions taken by your restaurant management to make sure next visit of group return to the restaurant.
Thanking You
Yours Truly
Navjot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'this letter'.
Suggestion: this letter
Dear sir / madam I am in writing this letter this letter to tell you that i am the regular custo...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...his letter this letter to tell you that i am the regular customer of your restaur...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e of staff has degraded in numerous ways . The trust of pride and legacy does no...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed in numerous ways . The trust of pride and legacy does not seems be continued....
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us ways . The trust of pride and legacy does not seems be continued. Firstly,...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...he trust of pride and legacy does not seems be continued. Firstly, the behaviour...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...he trust of pride and legacy does not seems be continued. Firstly, the behaviour...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cover group at the time of ordering food . In the addition the waiters are asking ...
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Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformed about the hygienic on the top of list. But during the time of meet the wa...
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Line 6, column 149, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ut during the time of meet the washroom are smelling with bad fragrance. In similar to citin...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your restaurant management to make sure next visit of group return to the restau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75423728814 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34326060392 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622881355932 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4368077624 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265343969202 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691433888591 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560162848927 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105308114296 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071284794317 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.