You are moving with your family to a new city.
Write a letter to a housing agent in that city about accommodation
In your letter
-Explain why and when are you moving
-describe where you want to live
-state the type of accommodation you want
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about suitable accommodation for my family.
We are currently living in Montreal and by 1st of next month, we will be moving to Toronto. My mother is suffering from asthma and the top specialists for this disease are available in Toronto. This is the reason why we are moving.
We would preferably like the residence to be in the center of the city. Transportation facilities should be easily accessible as we will be traveling a lot for treatment. Can you please try to find a place with a park? My children would love to play there.
We like to rent a house instead of an apartment. There should be a good ventilation system as my mother cannot breathe properly in closed places. My budget is around 2000 CAD a month.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ahsan Abid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78022475404 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.567668225 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.8461538462 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3076923077 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102740783563 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378424518181 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419257754478 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520582513611 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222373976296 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.14 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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