You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it.
Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee.
In your letter, express:
why you went to the shop/office
how the employees behaved to offend you
what you expect the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to register a complaint with you regarding your service and rude behavior of your employee with the customers. I hope that you will take a proper step so , that no other customer gets humiliated like me.
Last Monday (i.e., on 24th August) I have been to your shop in purchase of a washing machine. I was expecting assistance from your employees but none of them have concern to help the customers rather they were busy with the show displayed in TV.
I have taken the initiative and asked one your employee about the washing machine models and the range of cost available but instead of assisting he behaved rude by ignoring my request and asked me to contact other person in a sarcastic behavior.
I am not doing any favor for myself by purchasing my needs from your shop. It’s a minimum duty that your employee should guide a customer so, that the customer gets impressed and try to take products from you. We do have many choices in the market to buy a product other than your shop.
And personally I would not recommend your shop anymore for further purchasing with this kind of employees. Being , the owner of the shop it’s your decision now how you react to your employee behavior but surely it’s going to affect your shop deals with such kind of sales person who has no commitment for his job .
Yours faithfully,
Kalyani .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hope that you will take a proper step so , that no other customer gets humiliated ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...her person in a sarcastic behavior. I am not doing any favor for myself by pu...
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Line 10, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...asing with this kind of employees. Being , the owner of the shop it's your de...
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Line 10, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...person who has no commitment for his job . Yours faithfully, Kalyani . ...
^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...his job . Yours faithfully, Kalyani .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72427983539 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44425130419 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0773794542 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.363636364 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16790728423 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673078370026 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354439698261 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971822311988 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424638786626 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.