To whom it may concern,
I am writing this letter to complain about your terrible service at your restaurant that it happened on two days ago. I and my partner went to have a special dinner for our 21st anniversary on March 23rd at 07.30 pm.
Firstly, I have already made an appointment to reserve by the window but I was not happy that my table was in the middled- room.
Secondly, your food was sensational, on the other hand I was not enjoyable your staff service, typically in your male staff. He shouted on me during he was repeating my order.
Thirdly, your place was not ambience because it was too loud noise that day.
Finally, I write this letter to comment to your service that it was not the same as previous time. I hope that you and your staff have to manage and corporate as a teamwork and improve your service system.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Noppong Ampai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you. Yours faithfully, Noppong Ampai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, third, thirdly, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51204819277 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41725453062 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9281735265 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 4.34317383033 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228903253835 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946570971489 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903956795011 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105528979324 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965254222501 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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