Dear Mr. Peter,
My name is Jignesh, under the enrollment number G2064, I have registered the computer course in your reputated computer college. I am writing to let you know about my dissatisfaction with the course as well as request further to change my course.
Since more than a week, I am attending the lectures and studying which has already been studied during the course in my previous college. Upon enquiring with the lecturer, I came to know that computer basics will be going on initial six months of the course, which is really bothering me as well as wasting my time. To explain, daily I am traveling a hundred kilometers to attend this course which has already been studied.
However, I would like to request you to promote me to the advanced computer course which has also started parallel with us.
Consequently, I can furnish more knowledge in the same duration of time.
I would be grateful if you could consider my above request and change me to the advanced computer course.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely
Jignesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, really, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98351648352 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64187457461 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4320830032 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249988788737 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980509770842 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115770673371 0.0603063233224 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132548764867 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111310254374 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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