You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change the course.
• What course you are following now?
• Why you are not satisfied with the course?
• What course would you like to change to?
Dear Mr Johnson,
I’m writing this letter in regards to a desire for changing my new course at our college. I’m not really interest in studying at International Economics and would like to join a course about Tourism and Hospitality instead.
I appreciate that teachers in our school are all kind, knowledgeable and dedicated. However, it’s still difficult for me to understand almost lessons which relates to a complex and ever-changing picture about global economy. There are many complicated issues that makes me stressed and depressed although I made every effort to get the points.
Last week, my friend introduced me an online course about Tourism and Hospitality management. It’s unexpected that I really really love these lessons and find it amazing for everything regarding to travel. I’m not as unsatisfied as I used to be and would like to gain much knowledge about tourism as much as possible.
For this reason, I would really appreciate if you could allow me to change the course. I’m sure that my scores will be significantly improved in a new challenge.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Cuong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Johnson, I'm writing this letter in regards ...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...hnson, I'm writing this letter in regards to a desire for changing my new course at ...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d depressed although I made every effort to get the points. Last week, my fri...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: really
...management. It's unexpected that I really really love these lessons and find it amazing ...
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Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w challenge. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Your faithfully, Cuong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34042553191 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91830829655 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2790833535 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163254123892 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596685425291 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717418552184 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106099719223 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061783775162 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.