Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to let you know how bad the changing room conditions are and I am totally disappointed about this. I was about to register for your sports center but after I visited the changing room, unfortunately, I am saying this but I changed my decision to not to register.
Let me put it a finer point on it. All parts of the facilities are amazing and i was fascinated about it before I visited the changing room of the center. In front of the entrance of the changing room, there was a disgusting and nasty smell caused by not having good air circulation. As i have asthma the most important thing for me is inhaling the fresh air which I need the most. Because sometimes i maybe lack of oxygen and this condition obviously put me into that situation.
It would be better if you could renew the air conditioning systems it will not only benefit me it would be also better for your other memberships. As such you would also get more applicant, thus, It will also be beneficial for your facility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to let you know how bad the...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...parts of the facilities are amazing and i was fascinated about it before I visite...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43915343915 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63706591235 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5277669186 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165316629838 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653675818784 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594058303347 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114492522108 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645085884594 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.