The increase in population has been a significant indicator of people's lives in terms of choosing where to live. While some cities had been home to the people in previous years, Nowadays people even do not tend to live in those cities anymore. This essay will discuss the main causes which are crowd and traffic jams and will try to find objective solutions such as improving the cities and road systems.
Notoriously, Crowded cities and traffic jams have been a hard problem to tackle for human beings. Even though people want to release some stress and have calmness. These problems do not let them do so. In addition to this, it leads to some issues such as the disorders that stress causes. For instance, Living in a village or countryside is almost all the retired people's dream in order to be far away from the tiring life. Due to busy life exhaust people, They do not want to be part of a busy life, In contrast, they want to live in a populated city.
to make the cities more attractive and better places, improving roads and decreasing the density of people in the relevant areas may be crucial solutions. As long as urbanization is expanded toward out of the city, human number per area would be decreased. On the other hand, regulating and improving the road systems is a major solution as well. Thus, the biggest problem that is in people's minds would be solved. All these solutions might be way to incentive people to stay in the city rather than moving another one.
In conclusion, because of the reasons that are too many people and wasting time people are getting some problem with their health conditions, developing cities and road systems enable people to live wealthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...they want to live in a populated city. to make the cities more attractive and bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39596300271 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3324731093 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128978795326 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045333507836 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328232707533 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831606984742 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370904595463 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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