Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your students who have been taken an evening language course which is held by architecture faculty. I am writing to let you know that, unfortunately, I am engaged with too much housework and a project to do so that I won't be able to take the course at a particular duration. Would you kindly consider my situation favorably?
Let me put a finer point on why I can not attend evening courses. Once, I have seen your advertisement, I decided to take a course at night because of my work. But It was not expected that I would be extremely busy at the moment I have registered. Since all the works came out of nowhere, I am suffering from handling all those work that even I can not even find for myself to get relax. Therefore this class won't be suitable for me to attend, instead, it would be better for me to arrange a different time.
Would you please postpone my schedule for next semester? If you could set the time up for next semester, I would greatly appreciate it.
Yours sincerely
Erman Duran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... not even find for myself to get relax. Therefore this class wont be suitable for me to a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44041450777 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63341937054 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8568990729 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235347860404 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874236607579 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510019969071 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157856400172 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627888649706 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.