Increase of population and use of cars, traffic jam to became today's enormous problem that people are facing. To tackle this problem, as a solution to this issue, some people think that city life should be encouraged instead of living in a suburbs or a village life. I believe that encouraging city life is one of the most advantageous offer, though there are many alternative solutions such as public transportation.
As most of surbubs and countrysides established messy, it is obvious that traffic problem will occur. Roads not built or planned well as a result of this, some roads are either single way which is crucial point on traffic or no end. Therefore, drivers may be stuck in their ways and this result in a huge waste of time. In addition to this, it leads people to get mad or stress. As the people moved to the cities the roads can be built again.
On another hand, Parking problems constitute a large proportion of traffic jam. Firstly, In the urbanized places this problem is solved by building car parking buildings, whereas There is no availability to build a Car parking building in a suburb or countrysides due to their narrow and intensive establishment. For Instance, In my suburb, Roads are not as big as city road so that whenever some people park near the road, it blocks the road and traffic jam occurs. Although Engineers consider building a car parking building, it is not as wide as work vehicle can enter and build a building.
In conclusion, As long as people move to the cities, countrysides can be urbanized and transform to the city which enlarges the quality of life standard and people will be more likely to be happy and the productivity may increase simultaneously
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a suburb' or simply 'suburbs'?
Suggestion: a suburb; suburbs
...ould be encouraged instead of living in a suburbs or a village life. I believe that encou...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., it leads people to get mad or stress. As the people moved to the cities the road...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79054054054 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76713731875 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8241109284 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267922830672 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980563477468 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742208127581 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170272050318 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613393566535 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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