You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community.
Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton. In your letter
introduce your committee
say why you are having the meeting
invite the MP to attend
Dear Mrs Shelton,
I am an organising member of the non-profit organisation 'Our Green Planet', writing on behalf of our foundation and community members to invite the honourable MP, Mr Alex Cooper, to attend a conference about green areas on 21st December 2018 at Grand Hall. I am hoping that you would inform the honourable MP regarding the meeting and schedule his time for the same.
We are proud to have a delegate who represents us in the parliament and an advocate of the green movement. As a founding member of the 'Our Green Planet', I deem him the best person to have a discussion with the local citizens in this regards. 'Our Green Planet' has started its journey in 2001 and working to increase awareness about the green movement. Our organization has been highlighted in numerous national and international events and publications.
21st February 2018 is our 8th anniversary of this wonderful journey and we would like to make it special by focusing our goal, spreading awareness among people how individual steps can make our planet a better place to live in. We would be highly motivated if the honourable MP can spare some of his precious time and attend the meeting to discuss his views on that. We are expecting him to stay for an hour.
It would be so kind of you if you could inform our respected MP about the invitation and explain to him how important it is for us to have him.
Thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Laura Matthew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'Our'?
Suggestion: the; Our
...green movement. As a founding member of the Our Green Planet, I deem him the best perso...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...a discussion with the local citizens in this regards. Our Green Planet has started i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76078431373 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71519851215 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7024619909 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240794668235 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768277560429 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686344972131 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143580785129 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573064196327 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.