You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community.
Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton.
In your letter
introduce your committee
say why you are having the meeting
invite the MP to attend
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Shelton,
I am John from Alfa city,Karnal.I am president of Local Committe.I am writing a epistle about organising a meeting of green areas in it.our committee try to make green city in this state which is a famous historical city in world.our organasations try to aware people about tree and plants.our committee provides the different type of plant without any cost.
our organization held a meeting about to expand our work in more cities in this State.That's why we make green country.Moreover we invite ample number of institutions heads for this project Because our society want to aware all types of social organization about benefits of greenery. we want to try to distribute plants on this stage.we invites MP of this area for this work and describe about our work and project.Sothat we can start our this work in different cities with help and aprisation of Mp.we make a meeting on 5,August at 10AM.I heartly invite him very much.
I am looking forward your response as soon as possible.
Thanking You.
Your Faithfully,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-10-24 | Palki Sharma | 78 | view |
| 2020-09-08 | anchal saini | 61 | view |
| 2019-07-05 | baljits | 72 | view |
| 2019-06-06 | Apoorva Chikara | 89 | view |
| 2019-06-05 | Apoorva Chikara | 89 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shelton, I am John from Alfa city,Karnal.I am pre...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Karnal
...ar Shelton, I am John from Alfa city,Karnal.I am president of Local Committe.I am w...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...on, I am John from Alfa city,Karnal.I am president of Local Committe.I am wri...
^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...Karnal.I am president of Local Committe.I am writing a epistle about organising a...
^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Karnal.I am president of Local Committe.I am writing a epistle about organising a...
^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...resident of Local Committe.I am writing a epistle about organising a meeting of g...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...ferent type of plant without any cost. our organization held a meeting about to ex...
^^^
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
...d our work in more cities in this State.Thats why we make green country.Moreover we i...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...d our work in more cities in this State.Thats why we make green country.Moreover we i...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...s State.Thats why we make green country.Moreover we invite ample number of institutions ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...s State.Thats why we make green country.Moreover we invite ample number of institutions ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...rganization about benefits of greenery. we want to try to distribute plants on thi...
^^
Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'invite'
Suggestion: invite
...y to distribute plants on this stage.we invites MP of this area for this work and descr...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sothat
...and describe about our work and project.Sothat we can start our this work in different...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 538, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...p.we make a meeting on 5,August at 10AM.I heartly invite him very much. I am loo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93891210932 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 16.3608247423 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.201298303 44.8134815571 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.5 76.5299724578 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 16.8248392259 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168329902455 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987370851648 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587050259077 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826620868264 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394464680464 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 8.37731958763 285% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 70.7449484536 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 7.45979381443 269% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 8.62886597938 336% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 8.54432989691 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.