You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.
Dear Mathew,
Hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I am writing to ask you to join me for a vacation, as I am planning a short trip to Singapore for a week. As you know the kind of stress I have gone through lately at the office. Thus it is quite crucial for me to take a step back and reevaluate my life by taking a vacation.
Singapore is a Metropolis with many interesting places to explore. I am in touch with a local travel agency who can arrange the trip for us including the stamping of visas. We can visit all the attractions like the zoo, river safari, night safari, city museum, gardens by the bay, east coast park. Sentosa island is the best manmade islands around the world and it on my must do list, we can do a lot of adventure activities like roller coaster rides and explore theme parks. On top of this, there are many beautiful islands with white sand beaches and clear water near to the mainland.
Why don’t you join with me on this adventure?. You always wanted to travel overseas and this is a golden opportunity. If you come along then I am sure this vacation will become more exciting and I could really use your tour management skills.
I look forward to your reply.
warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g a short trip to Singapore for a week. As you know the kind of stress I have gone...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...have gone through lately at the office. Thus it is quite crucial for me to take a st...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...ls. I look forward to your reply. warm wishes vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, then, thus, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40869565217 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38308468746 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4098896766 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4285714286 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228922023393 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787180545686 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790827628284 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149070721894 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804083450102 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.