You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.•Why you need a holiday.•Your holiday plans.•Why you need your friend to join with you.

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You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.

Dear Mathew,
Hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I am writing to ask you to join me for a vacation, as I am planning to go to Singapore for a week.this is a much-needed break as I wanted to recompose myself from this stressful life.

Singapore is a Metropolis with many interesting places to explore. I am in touch with a travel agency who can arrange the trip for us including the stamping of visas. We can visit all the attractions like the zoo, river safari, night safari, city museum, gardens by the bay, east coast park. Sentosa island is the best manmade islands around the world and it on my must do list, we can do a lot of adventure activities like roller coaster rides and explore theme parks. On top of this, there are many beautiful islands and beaches which are an hours journey from the mainland.

You always wanted to travel overseas and this is a golden opportunity. If you come along then I am sure this vacation will become more exciting and I would not feel lonely.

I look forward to your reply.

warm wishes
vinshu

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, Hope this letter finds you in best of yo...
^^^
Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...beautiful islands and beaches which are an hours journey from the mainland. Yo...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
.... I look forward to your reply. warm wishes vinshu
^^^^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k forward to your reply. warm wishes vinshu
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44995070888 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2961477584 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185873308938 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670519658589 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749373995389 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130104758403 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899851037665 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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