Dear Sara,
It has been a long time since we have been in touch. I am guilty of not being able to write to you for so long.
I was recently promoted as a manager and the work has been keeping me busy. To be honest, I am finding the work quite stressful.
As I was reading the newspaper this morning, I saw and advertisement that read about a holiday package for two to Goa.
I know that you are doing some research about the influence of colonization in Goa for your thesis.
I was wondering if you might be interested in joining for a holiday to Goa?
The package includes a visit to a typical Goan village and a home stay, where you can enjoy home made food.
Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the churches in Goa. Apparently, the guide is an architect and has made a great deal of study about the influence of Portuguese architecture in the churches.
I think this would be a great get away for both of us to spend some quality time at the beaches, soak in the sun, and do some fishing as well. let me know if you would like to meet for a lunch sometime next week to discuss the idea.
I am really looking forward to this holiday. Can't wait to catch up!!!
Love,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...n enjoy home made food. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the churches in ...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n enjoy home made food. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the churches i...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...n enjoy home made food. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the churches in ...
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Line 11, column 35, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ood. Also, there is a a guided tour to some of the churches in Goa. Apparently, the guide ...
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Line 13, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...n the sun, and do some fishing as well. let me know if you would like to meet for a...
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Line 15, column 46, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...really looking forward to this holiday. Cant wait to catch up!!! Love, Rajie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, look, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21212121212 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35949401541 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8444080889 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157447182637 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534383638627 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649729184566 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732519955772 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646774051174 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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