You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:• Explain when and how long you will be in town.• Ask whether you can stay at their home.• Offer to pay for yourself.

Essay topics:

You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:

• Explain when and how long you will be in town.

• Ask whether you can stay at their home.

• Offer to pay for yourself.

Dear Jay,

I’m writing to you to tell you about my upcoming visit to your town. I’ll be there next weekend and stay there for one week. I was searching for some good hotel but I’m unable to find the same because of Christmas week.

Let me explain the situation in more detail. I was supposed to have this trip next month for which I have already done all the bookings but due to some unavoidable reasons, I have to reschedule my visit. I just wanted to get it to confirm from you that if I can stay with you for a week.

Furthermore, I know that your economic condition is not good so I do not want to be a burden on your family; therefore, I would like to pay for my stay which we can discuss later. Please discuss with your family about my stay and respond to me accordingly.

Waiting for your response!

Best wishes,
Sam

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38364779874 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38632630245 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3448884969 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4444444444 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282702002936 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118328736889 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803011951454 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178090218657 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270895412412 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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