You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions:• How long should you plan to stay for• What you should bring wi

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You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions:
• How long should you plan to stay for
• What you should bring with you
• What you would like to do there

Dear Geetha,
Hello Geetha,I hope you are doing well.As you know that I am planning to stay in Canada with you for my summer vacation.i am writing this letter to find out some necessary information before my journey commences.
As i am traveling to a new environment,I want to know that what are the most important things which I need to pack and carry with me as i am traveling for the first time i am so nervous as well as excited to see you.
I need to book my return tickets so what will be my exact return date to my hometown.Is that ok if I book my tickets on 30th of this month.is that time will be sufficient to cover all the important holiday destinations in that country.
I would like to know about my plan of the vacation and what places we are going to cover in 15 days.
iam really feeling very enthusiastic to start my trip to your country Canada.
i will be awaiting for your response.
with regards
priya

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Geetha, Hello Geetha,I hope you are doing well.A...
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Dear Geetha, Hello Geetha,I hope you are doing well.As you know tha...
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... Hello Geetha,I hope you are doing well.As you know that I am planning to stay in ...
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... Canada with you for my summer vacation.i am writing this letter to find out some...
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...ation before my journey commences. As i am traveling to a new environment,I wan...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... As i am traveling to a new environment,I want to know that what are the most imp...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ich I need to pack and carry with me as i am traveling for the first time i am so...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...me as i am traveling for the first time i am so nervous as well as excited to see...
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... be my exact return date to my hometown.Is that ok if I book my tickets on 30th of...
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...ces we are going to cover in 15 days. iam really feeling very enthusiastic to sta...
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...start my trip to your country Canada. i will be awaiting for your response. w...
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...start my trip to your country Canada. i will be awaiting for your response. w...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...rip to your country Canada. i will be awaiting for your response. with regards priya
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...i will be awaiting for your response. with regards priya
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...aiting for your response. with regards priya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, thus, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52174219013 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588571428571 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4270365861 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209943341174 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914593418893 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885254184185 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102635943391 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996764929404 0.0580467560999 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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