You are An. Recently, your class decided to go on a 2-day field trip in a village near Hanoi, and stayed at a local homestay. In their feedback, your classmates said they liked the homestay, but they were unhappy about the food. Write a letter to the owner of the homestay.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to give my feedback about your homestay which we had rent last week.
My class had a 2-day field excursion in a village near Hanoi and was looking for a homestay. We had been advertised that not only was your homestay large enough for a class of 15 people but also it was a beautiful place, therefore, we decided to rent for 2 days. In general, the homestay was quite great: kind owner, reasonable price, attentive service, big rooms, nice view, … Especially, we really liked the swimming pool, it was a perfect place for pictures and parties.
Your homestay was so quality, however, our class was pretty dissatisfied with the food at the homestay. The menu was poor with normal and usual food. Some were overcooked and others were unfreshed. Your homestay is near the farm so I do feel that it is a creative way to use the farm productions, which are picked by the guess, as the ingredients. Or you can add some local specialty to diversify the menu. Everyone may be joyful. Those are some suggestions to improve the food. I hope you can mention them.
All the best in your business
Yours faithfully,
An
- You are An Recently your class decided to go on a 2 day field trip in a village near Hanoi and stayed at a local homestay In their feedback your classmates said they liked the homestay but they were unhappy about the food Write a letter to the owner of th 89
- YOU RE AN THE PRESIDENT OF THE YOUTH CLUB IN YOUR 2ND SCHOOL ON BEHALF OF THE MEMBERS WRITE A LETTER TO INVITE A FAMOUS PERSON TO GIVE A SPEECH AT ONE OF YOUR CLUB S MEETING 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59615384615 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52480299776 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6726299218 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5384615385 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298156807551 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965492738815 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680149253797 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159147113986 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437040513339 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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