You are a secretary, planning a corporate event. Write a letter to Entertainment Company explaining the kind of party you would like to organize, indicate the date and time of the event and your special requests.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am working in TCS Company as a secretary. I am writing this to arrange a party at your hall.
I want to arrange a retirement party for one of my colleagues. Actually, one of colleague is going to retire from our company and we want to give him a grand party as he is serving our company from last 37 years.
He joined the company in May 1973 and as per the company norms he will be retiring on May 31 hence, the party will be held on the same day in the evening around 6:30 pm after office hours. Our office usually ends at 5:00 pm but all employees want some time to get ready, therefore, the party we have decided to give them one and a half hours.
As per your website, the room will able to handle 50 people at a time, and decoration will be as per the party theme. I know smoking is not allowed in your hotel, I am fine with it but I would like to request you that kindly serve only bear no other alcoholic drinking. I have yet to decide about the dinner but for that I want to have your menu card so that I can discuss it will the rest of the members. Please send me that on jot@catservices.com.
I look forward to a reply from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0375 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36537156466 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554166666667 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7361739324 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162147079831 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592913878107 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457443988965 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825895968675 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367533873283 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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