Dear Mr. Shelby,
I am your tenant for the past four months in your apartment 201, rockwood society building 3. This apartment is nearest to the language school center where I got admission to study French for my professional purposes.
There is no doubt about the serene surroundings and beautiful environment near your rental house but, I and my flatmates are facing an issue with the problem of using water in your apartment. The boiler is not heating the water and constantly stops working in the past few days. We called your maintenance guy, and he could not fix the issue permanently. He suggested buying a new boiler because the current one is in damped condition. Apart from this, we are unable to take showers in the morning before going to language school due to the cold weather and cold water. In the evening, we are unable to wash utensils after dinner because of the cold water. With these problems, life has become hard and I feel terribly without hot water.
Fortunately, I went to the market yesterday and found a new boiler which is not very expensive. I have enclosed all the details along with shop contact and address to buy the new boiler machine. Please grant money to your workmen and sent them to buy the new boiler machine. Without a boiler, there could risk of getting sick with using cold water in this cold weather. With such kind of risk, it will affect our learning at school. We could not take this kind of risk with our professional careers. Therefore, I urge you to take immediate action with this current problem in your flat.
I am looking forward to a quick resolution.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47280334728 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32624694949 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4775592239 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3571428571 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15737251947 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570281807919 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566985009514 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083752240943 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065225951652 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.