Dear Lindsey,
I am delighted to hear that you'll be coming to India in a couple of months. I still remember our meeting in Norway last year where you have helped me to get a place to stay with you. I didn't expect a help from a person who I just got to know for a very short period of time. However, I was so thankful to your help provided on my last vacation to Norway, and somehow we become friends.
I am glad that I'm finally getting an opportunity to return the favor. While you are in India, you can stay with my family. We have a spacious apartment in New Delhi. We have two guest rooms which has an attached bathroom. Also, your office building is nearest to my place, so it will be convenient for you to stay at my place. Not only you could save your expenses, but also we will get a chance to know more about each other.
During your stay in my city, we could see the lovely stunning destinations along with amazing temples and palaces. Also, you'll get a chance to enjoy various Indian Dishes during this trip. I'm hoping that you will accept my invitation to come to my place during your business trip to India.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Shain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...Lindsey, I am delighted to hear that youll be coming to India in a couple of month...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ped me to get a place to stay with you. I didnt expect a help from a person who I...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d me to get a place to stay with you. I didnt expect a help from a person who I just ...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...who I just got to know for a very short period of time. However, I was so thankful to your hel...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ow we become friends. I am glad that Im finally getting an opportunity to retur...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...with amazing temples and palaces. Also, youll get a chance to enjoy various Indian Di...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...various Indian Dishes during this trip. Im hoping that you will accept my invitati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3127753304 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2256246042 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3600658203 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2666666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238367570407 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078125742356 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761875929112 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147061041608 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396159454216 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.