You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party.
Dear Hareem,
I’m writing to tell you about the confound birthday party of Maheen.we all have been studying here for 6 months. We are wholly exhilarating, because of that our dream came true to study in abroad. In starting of the semester, we were hectic in study, did not go to visit any place. I have noticed many times, Maheen is feeling longing for home, so i was worried about her. Nida told me yesterday, about her birthday in coming month which is held on 25th of the November. It is honor to us to contribute her blooming. However, her birthday surprise party have been decided.
In addition, birthday celebration venue has been selected according to her nature. Party will be start on Monday 25 of the November at the mid night near sea side Di Fara restaurant.
I have discussed with all the classmates about their participation in the party. All classmates are divided into the Three groups, one group of them will bring the candles. Second will bring caps, furthermore third group will bring the cake.
Iam eagerly waiting for your response.
Regards,
Erum
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., I'm writing to tell you about the confound birthday party of Maheen.we all have be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Maheen is feeling longing for home, so i was worried about her. Nida told me yes...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, second, so, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52633830808 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4283022241 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205143837005 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625778603985 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644970143628 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947934932557 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752382619714 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.