You are studying in a large town where there are no leisure facilities for young people. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
Describe the problem
Make some suggestions for leisure facilities
Say why you think that these facilities will make the town a better place.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the dearth of recreational facilities for children in the Rock Town.
I am a student of Sheridan college and many youngsters are facing problems due to the shortage of leisure centres in the vicinity of the town, which forces them to travel to a close-by town to play sports or spend their free time indoor gazing at the screens.
I would like to recommend that the state authorities should construct a leisure complex near our college, which is on the Trafargar street or alternately the vacant land in the Central Park. The council also consider demolishing an old government-owned building on the London street and rebuilding it for this purpose.
This would encourage the youth to do exercise and take part in sports on a regular basis. Thus, the community will be able to develop a healthier city and the teenagers will leave their sedentary lifestyle and increase their social circle by meeting new friends.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Khang Do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e time indoor gazing at the screens. I would like to recommend that the state ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96089385475 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69092871404 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3517850839 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153432057935 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532303813988 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481101125421 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081943587808 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529224694543 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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