Dear Sir,
I am working as Assistant Manager in your legal team and writing this letter to request you some time off from work.
Currently,my profile is to deal with Patent work. After recognizing importance of Intellectual property rights, I decided to embark my new career, by pursuing Diploma in Copy right laws. Hence, I request you leave for 4 months as course is intensive and full time.
Subsequently, after resuming to my regular work, I promise to update all my pending work by spending extra hours during weekends. Further, I am planning to take help from my colleagues who happily agreed to attend my work on urgent basis. On the other hand, our teammates will share me enough data to proceed with the supply margin for on going demand.
As you must be aware, potentials of candidate with knowledge in diversified subjects, will not only brings prospects to my professional life but also rise stakes of our company. Certainly, my newly acquired expertise, shall open doors to new market for our organisation. Similarly, sharing my skills with other employers will reduce training costs that we endure on annual workshop.
After explaining myself, I hope you find my proposal reasonable and look forward for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Jones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this letter to request you some time off from work. Currently,my profile is to...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...u some time off from work. Currently,my profile is to deal with Patent work. Af...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...for 4 months as course is intensive and full time. Subsequently, after resuming to my ...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...a to proceed with the supply margin for on going demand. As you must be aware, potent...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... in diversified subjects, will not only brings prospects to my professional life but a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, similarly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13875598086 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72942079429 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717703349282 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.411062498 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252119384146 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917419389598 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106982064918 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16656023456 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135293873784 0.0580467560999 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.