You are unable to attend a goodbye party of a colleague at work. Write to him/her and say,
– Why can’t you come?
– Give him/her your best wishes.
– Suggest another time and place for you to meet.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear James,
I am writing this letter because of my absence in your farewell party held couple of weeks ago. Let me the elaborate the situation in detail.
Elucidating in detail, I am so sorry for not to be a part of your special occasion. Firstly, I was prepared in advance to make you astonished by throwing a surprise party on your last day. Even some of the plans as well as celebrations I have made personally from my side. But, the day when I was getting ready to come to the party unfortunately, I fall from the ladders and got fractured. Besides, there was no one at home. Simultaneously, I couldn't even in the condition to barely stand or reach up to my phone. Unluckily, that was terribly a worst day of my life. Meanwhile, the housekeeper came and he took me to hospital.
Wishing you all the best for your future. Also, don't worry , I am sure you will do well. Moreover, don' t feel isolated in the new environment you are a dynamic personality who can adjust specifically.
At the end, as soon as I will get well, We both will get together in our favorite cuisine near to the ferry. Till then have a deliberate blessings from my side to you for your blossom future.
Yours faithfully,
Ravi.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, I was prepared in advance to make you astonished by throwing a surprise party ...
^^
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...a surprise party on your last day. Even some of the plans as well as celebrations I have m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the plans as well as celebrations I have made personally from my side. But, the d...
^^
Line 9, column 446, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e was no one at home. Simultaneously, I couldnt even in the condition to barely stand o...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 546, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... my phone. Unluckily, that was terribly a worst day of my life. Meanwhile, the ho...
^
Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...you all the best for your future. Also, dont worry , I am sure you will do well. Mor...
^^^^
Line 13, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e best for your future. Also, dont worry , I am sure you will do well. Moreover, d...
^^
Line 17, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'blessing'?
Suggestion: blessing
... the ferry. Till then have a deliberate blessings from my side to you for your blossom fu...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, even so, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73660714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22984844655 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1336985251 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3125 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191184648798 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059059069439 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06259341968 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100209583504 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583469824432 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.