Dear Sir/Madam,
First of all, I would appreciate your daily news which update almost all aspects of social life. Actually, this morning I saw at the first page of your newspaper informing the plant to enlarge Tan Son Nhat international airport to serve the double amount of flights. Since I’m currently living under airplane approaching line, I would like to write you about my concern about this project.
Actually, at this moment over my house, the planes land regularly every five minutes. The terrible noise caused by air flood and vehicles’ machine pollutes our living environment, affects all daily activities and is the reason for many health problems.
I’m worry that the upgrading project could make my situation worse since by reading your article, I understand that there will be a significant increase in number of flights approaching the airport, as the result, the noise population is predicted to sharply rise. By writing this letter, I would like to ask your editor to do a research about the concern of habitants nearby the airport on this plan and then publish another article to report.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20967741935 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67468120124 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682795698925 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.726250437 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.428571429 76.5299724578 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220916701339 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922935200556 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570864683434 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125655690409 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733233064564 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.