You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not wa

Dear Newspaper Editor,

My name is John employed in the multination organisation as a software engineer, residing in Malir near to the local airport. However, recently published in the local newspaper about an enhancement plan for the airport. Therefore, this letter to express dissatisfaction against the advancement planned towards it and enlighten you about the problems.

Furthermore, it was never regrettable because four to five flights each day do not cause much noise pollution. However, expansion may affect many people and organisations based in this area. For example, not only children studying in school or college affected by the sound coming out of the engine. Although, severe attack such as hearing or heart problem incurs to elder or old age people.

Therefore, consider this feedback on behalf of residents of this area, the expansion would produce many problems in people life. Besides, please publish this post in your local newspaper against airport progression.

Expectedly, looking forward to hearing from you at earliest.

Yours Faithfully,
John Moses

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60240963855 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88452959068 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722891566265 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6769815614 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212460175435 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074142016288 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626373539859 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921436015076 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842677092019 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.