You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter:•Describe your future wife/husband.•What will happen at the wedding?•Why do you want to invite him/her?

Dear Friend,
How are you doing? The purpose of this letter is to invite you to my wedding with your family held on 5th October. Besides, please arrive a week before the wedding date. Certainly and Surprisingly, you already know her from the days of shcool. Our classmate Penelope, tall and beautiful girl in the whole school. We were dating since past one year as we work together in the same organisation. Finally, we decided to turn the relationship into marriage.

Furthermore, for the celebration of the wedding ceremony catering have been organised from the most suitable and famous food provider. In addition to this, other arrangments for dancing, special effects and the musical show had organised. However, including you and your family, 100 guests have been catered after church service at the landmark hotel.

Moreover, it will be a great delight to have you as a maid of honour. Please accept my invitation. Words cannot describe my excitement and eagerness to see you.

Yours Sincerely,
John Moses

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Friend, How are you doing? The purpose of this l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67928561907 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732142857143 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4986617304 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1428571429 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245357615759 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723563587468 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740738777507 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127121091468 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497483142754 0.0580467560999 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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