You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter:•Describe your future wife/husband.•What will happen at the wedding?•Why do you want to invite him/her?

Essay topics:

You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter:
• Describe your future wife/husband.
• What will happen at the wedding?
• Why do you want to invite him/her?

Dear Elsie,

Guess what? I'm writing to inform you of my proposed wedding ceremony and date which will be in August. Do not miss it for anything in the world.

As you know, Jack and I have been dating for 7 years and finally decided to make it a forever business as we usually say, LOL. Overtime, he has proven to be caring, understanding, hardworking and exceptionally loving. Couldn't have asked for more. In addition, his facial looks, height and perfect body physic has left him irresistible, he's my everything.

Let's cut to the chase, a top-notch event planner has already been hired by my mom for général coordination. A guest of 50 will be catered for after the church service at the landmark event center, VI. Itinerary includes welcome dance, special effects, an after party and a fairy tale themed decor.

As for you my darling, it will be of great delight to have you as my maid of honor, you're a perfect fit because of your exposure, outstanding attitude and sense of humor, always the life of the party, plus you're the only friend i have. Kindly accept my request and come a week before the fixed date.

Words cannot describe how excited and eager I am to see you.

Lové,
Sena

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ted and eager I am to see you. Lové, Sena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, as for, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66822429907 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52390527262 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68691588785 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5521870206 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157155570198 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409082552148 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536222961121 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872183719396 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535909263821 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.